Below you can see our first rough cut, overall we are happy with the way it went and turned out. we chose to focus on getting the shots in order and adding credits. We wanted to makes sure we was sticking to our storyboard as much as possible, this is so we don't get confused on what has been completed and what hasn't. We added in a few transitions too. However we are aware that it still has a far way to come, we know that the transitions needed to be sorted and also need to explore more types. We know some parts are missing such as effects, like our recording mark (overlay). And lastly we are aware that it is under time, however we may be adding in more shots or lengthening the ones we have.
Rough Cut
Second Rough Cut
After feedback we decided to try to improve our rough cut, while doing this we also wanted to experiment and see what sort of things we can do to our opening whether this was making shots quicker or slower, adding in foley, transitions or even layered effects. We wanted to do this because it made up have more knowledge of the editing software we was using. It also gave us a chance to try to meet the conventions of our genre. Below you will be able to see our second rough cut: